3.6.11

ínfimo




menos que isso muito menos
menos que muito muito mais
mais é menos ou muito mais?

mais que muitos menos mais
é muito mais ou menos


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Em traduções e transcriações de Lavínia Saad [palavrogramas]:


infinitesimal

i. (Tentando preservar simetria, ritmo e aliteração.)


less than this so much less
less than much so much more
is more less or so much more?

more than many less more
is much more or less


ii. (Tomando liberdades)


so much less than this so much less
less than lots so much more
more is less-- or far much more?

more than many minus more
is so much more or so much less


iii. (Reação)

whittle the maximum
into absolute minimum

i make myself less than the sum
of my total arts

the total splinters into
a thousand parts.

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  1. infinitesimal

    i. (Tentando preservar simetria, ritmo e aliteração.)


    less than this so much less
    less than much so much more
    is more less or so much more?

    more than many less more
    is much more or less


    ii. (Tomando liberdades)


    so much less than this so much less
    less than lots so much more
    more is less-- or far much more?

    more than many minus more
    is so much more or so much less


    iii. (Reação)

    whittle the maximum
    into absolute minimum

    i make myself less than the sum
    of my total arts

    the total splinters into
    a thousand parts.

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